i love it....
i love this beat...like...it makes me think of my hometown...i think u got a universal theme track here lol
i love it....
i love this beat...like...it makes me think of my hometown...i think u got a universal theme track here lol
lol thanks but this is my London theme :)
Ummmm
Work on the flow and ending your rhyme schemes..u left a lot of them open. i mean like dead ends..u expect another rhyme and u start whole new bars. I say practice...and study rappers...not always psychopathic but like tupac, NWA, early shit ya know? write with substance and a messege while still blowing away with lyricism and flow. no flow is a no go feel meh? Check out some of my songs i've posted...i'm not the best but you'll see what i'm talking about.
yea this one i kinda just through shit together....i dont normally do this kinda stuff...lol
hmmm
the voice sounds familiar...what's ur rap name?
Ereez
Age 36, Male
Rapper/Lyracist
Graduated
Jacksonville, Florida
Joined on 2/9/09