woa...
take it professional man...i have a feeling u'd have no trouble gettinced...
woa...
take it professional man...i have a feeling u'd have no trouble gettinced...
Ummmm
Work on the flow and ending your rhyme schemes..u left a lot of them open. i mean like dead ends..u expect another rhyme and u start whole new bars. I say practice...and study rappers...not always psychopathic but like tupac, NWA, early shit ya know? write with substance and a messege while still blowing away with lyricism and flow. no flow is a no go feel meh? Check out some of my songs i've posted...i'm not the best but you'll see what i'm talking about.
yea this one i kinda just through shit together....i dont normally do this kinda stuff...lol
I absolutely love it.
yo...would u consider selling it to me? i got some sick shit in mind for it.
STRAIGHT FIRE!!!
I love this beat....man all your beats are hot!!!
in AWE!
Definitely Underground bro...i'm lovin it...let me know ur stipulation on usage? i'd really appreciate it..please PM me with details?
any were But MySpace
u can use for what ever u feel like as long as its not for sale
also u have to Recognize me as the author and a link to My NewGrounds Page
Just Read The Creative Commons Liscenes and if u follow that you shud be fine
SPEECHLESS
Excellent...definitly nerdcore sounding....i would love to make a track..maybe like..see a girl in the club and step to her...but ONLY USE GAMING METAPHORES.
i like
Sounds like a track i could hear DR. Steel singing on....but i say if u want toy box...the best soundin beat was in Insane Clown Posse's song "TOY BOX" on their cd "The RiddleBox".
Perfect
just....amazing
hmmmm
I hear a rapper named Jumpsteady doin somethin with this one...it's perfect for him...hell his last cd was called "MOTFG" "master of the flying gullitine" lol
Mee Likey
i love the slight oriental sound and shit...it's nice...these are the lyrics in my head with this one
So u thought ur were the one
gonna try and take me down
down like a frown when i burned ya town down
cuz when i spit this might as well be called gas
and this track for instance being the damn match
.....and i lost it...damn lol
Age 35, Male
Rapper/Lyracist
Graduated
Jacksonville, Florida
Joined on 2/9/09