woa...
take it professional man...i have a feeling u'd have no trouble gettinced...
woa...
take it professional man...i have a feeling u'd have no trouble gettinced...
Ummmm
Work on the flow and ending your rhyme schemes..u left a lot of them open. i mean like dead ends..u expect another rhyme and u start whole new bars. I say practice...and study rappers...not always psychopathic but like tupac, NWA, early shit ya know? write with substance and a messege while still blowing away with lyricism and flow. no flow is a no go feel meh? Check out some of my songs i've posted...i'm not the best but you'll see what i'm talking about.
yea this one i kinda just through shit together....i dont normally do this kinda stuff...lol
I absolutely love it.
yo...would u consider selling it to me? i got some sick shit in mind for it.
i like
Sounds like a track i could hear DR. Steel singing on....but i say if u want toy box...the best soundin beat was in Insane Clown Posse's song "TOY BOX" on their cd "The RiddleBox".
Perfect
just....amazing
hmmmm
I hear a rapper named Jumpsteady doin somethin with this one...it's perfect for him...hell his last cd was called "MOTFG" "master of the flying gullitine" lol
Age 36, Male
Rapper/Lyracist
Graduated
Jacksonville, Florida
Joined on 2/9/09